This story is tragic! I was expecting something more uplifting at the end, like someone flashing a thumbs-up for completing a scary dive--but no, I was very wrong! There's no question about what this narrative is about, though, so good job with the clarity!
This story is tragic! I was expecting something more uplifting at the end, like someone flashing a thumbs-up for completing a scary dive--but no, I was very wrong! There's no question about what this narrative is about, though, so good job with the clarity!
ReplyDeleteTragic indeed. But well told, in fact for a story to be tragic it has to be well told, otherwise its farce.
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